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A. Wilder Westgate (she/they)'s avatar

I've never heard of frost flowers! Your poem and the pictures are stunning.

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Rebekah Jensen's avatar

I loved learning the science behind the frost flowers. And the poem itself is gorgeous!

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Once I got started, I couldn't believe all the firsts and lasts that stand out to me over the course of a year (or nine months, to be precise).

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First bluebells, first bluebird

First spring beauty and sparrow choir

Last driveway snow, first warbler flash

then garlic shoot, shooting star

balsamroot, swallow swoop

arnica, harlequin, bear cub, lupine.

Last woodstove fire, first firewood cut

First grosbeak, bitterroot, garden greens

trickling flute, ravensquawk, fawnwobble

and very hot day. First smoke

brings strawberries. First backpack

brings snap peas. First haul of raspberries

means last song of Swainson’s.

First wasp sting, last wood-pewee

First tomato, last warble

First eggplant and pepper

Last backpack and vireo.

First frost, first mountain snow

First woodstove fire, last high hike

First yard skiff, last parsley

First snowshoe, last bear

First yard dump, first ski, last prism light,

first Christmas tree,

then that little breath-catch beyond

the galaxy of alphas and omegas,

where I sit quietly and

complete the circle.

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