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Kim Nelson's avatar

And so it is for each of us. The realization removes some of the resistance.

Rebekah Jensen's avatar

I love the repetition and playfulness in this poem! And this was a fun prompt. The word that came to me was hatch, which is not unlike open, and my poem also asked to be written percussively. Call me copycat, sister, or both! ;)

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Hatch

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The mouths we feed

The lines we draw

The cracks we form

The exit door

The senator

Unfolding sneeze

Way forward, way out

Way through

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